Be Positive

we waste our lives thinking what will happen next and we never try to be happy at present...

 
The way you see the world might be different than others

Life is tough you feel 

People are obtuse you think

Living in this way might bring you down

Try to learn from the things you see around

Everyone has some kind of difficulties in life

Live with a positive frame of mind

If you try to make everyone happy 

eventually that happiness comes back to you

Help someone in need because you will never know

Don't crush yourself from inside 

You hate your life,

while someone dreams of having your life

You need to be strong

You need to be calm

You will get everything with time

Author's Note

Honest views please...I appreciate your time :)
rate it also :)

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

"People"

1. I love the R a i n b o w effect of deliciousness. For me, the Rainbow refers to the following:

(1) Gay Rights
(2) Unity
(3) Art

PICTURE

1. EXCELLENT source of inspiration! It makes us feel something rather than pity. It makes us feel...connected.

"strong"

1. The blue color represents:

(1) Strength
(2) Calm
(3) Beauty

FONT OF CHOICE

(1) Orange tends to be about summer and amazing suns.

MUSIC SUGGESTIONS for HAPPYNESS

1. Sublime
2. Ballyhoo
3. Slightly Stoopid

"You will get everything with time"

1. Excellent message!
2. We all tend to feel fear.
3. We all tend to feel self-pity.
4. We all tend to feel sadness
5. We all... will r i s e up!

VOCABULARY I ENJOYED:

1. Happy: Gives positivity :)
2. Abstruse: It gives the poem intelligence.
3. Dreams: It gives us hope!

CONCLUSION

1. Mission accomplished!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Vria P Crow]

You are welcome:D

[Akshat♥]

No problem heart hacker lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

LMAO HAHAHAHAHA So much love in the air like a little Harry Potter snare:P

[Akshat♥]

I wish to become little harry Rofl :D

[Vria P Crow]

dirty harry

[Vria P Crow]

:P

[Akshat♥]

not a dirty one...just a sweet one lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

We need an instant messaging system here:P

[Akshat♥]

Someone please add a messaging system here :P

[Anusha Prabhu]

You hate your life,
while someone dreams of having your life

Loved this line!! Keep writing!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

incredible :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you ji ;)

[Prritiy]

positivity flows out, nice.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Amber "Victoriomantic" ..]

Nice message! We do need more positivity in this world.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Great message! Quaint and positive. I dig.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Katseye]

Strong work. Love the message!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[FocusedAmnesia]

I really like the last three lines. It really wraps up the piece, powerful and moving.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
This poem spoke volumes. As usual you make me muse while you continue to amaze me. We each are given 86,400 seconds in each day. These seconds are a gift! I think if we try living with an attitude of gratitude we’ll find happiness in these seconds. I do not see it as whether the glass is half full or half empty. But do I have a glass today that a drop might be placed in.
Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much...means a lot to me :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is beautiful!....you have such an uplifting message!!
There are no words to express what is overflowing in my heart... your positive and caring energy within this write is overwhelming...it has a sobering effect to what optimism can do for a troubled soul...very Emotive piece my friend!~xo~

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much dear :)

[Muse]

Help someone in need because you will never know

because you never know when you might need that same generosity in return. Great penning. :)))

[Akshat♥]

thank u so much :)