Be Positive

we waste our lives thinking what will happen next and we never try to be happy at present...

 
The way you see the world might be different than others

Life is tough you feel 

People are obtuse you think

Living in this way might bring you down

Try to learn from the things you see around

Everyone has some kind of difficulties in life

Live with a positive frame of mind

If you try to make everyone happy 

eventually that happiness comes back to you

Help someone in need because you will never know

Don't crush yourself from inside 

You hate your life,

while someone dreams of having your life

You need to be strong

You need to be calm

You will get everything with time

Author's Note

Honest views please...I appreciate your time :)
rate it also :)

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

"People"

1. I love the R a i n b o w effect of deliciousness. For me, the Rainbow refers to the following:

(1) Gay Rights
(2) Unity
(3) Art

PICTURE

1. EXCELLENT source of inspiration! It makes us feel something rather than pity. It makes us feel...connected.

"strong"

1. The blue color represents:

(1) Strength
(2) Calm
(3) Beauty

FONT OF CHOICE

(1) Orange tends to be about summer and amazing suns.

MUSIC SUGGESTIONS for HAPPYNESS

1. Sublime
2. Ballyhoo
3. Slightly Stoopid

"You will get everything with time"

1. Excellent message!
2. We all tend to feel fear.
3. We all tend to feel self-pity.
4. We all tend to feel sadness
5. We all... will r i s e up!

VOCABULARY I ENJOYED:

1. Happy: Gives positivity :)
2. Abstruse: It gives the poem intelligence.
3. Dreams: It gives us hope!

CONCLUSION

1. Mission accomplished!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Vria P Crow]

You are welcome:D

[Akshat♥]

No problem heart hacker lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

LMAO HAHAHAHAHA So much love in the air like a little Harry Potter snare:P

[Akshat♥]

I wish to become little harry Rofl :D

[Vria P Crow]

dirty harry

[Vria P Crow]

:P

[Akshat♥]

not a dirty one...just a sweet one lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

We need an instant messaging system here:P

[Akshat♥]

Someone please add a messaging system here :P

[Day Dreamer]

The poem is a tad rushed at the beginning but it is otherwise a very good peace. Good job!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Day Dreamer]

You're welcome

[TheSweet]

This is something I was trying to explain only earlier today. How everyone views from a different perspective so you should not think ill of all people for certain things you're not happy with. It's still important to do the best you can to make as many people happy as you can. Moral philosophy in a nut-shell :D

I enjoyed this write, it made me feel reinforced in doing the things I do. Also well written and love the colouring you've added, it certainly adds something. Thanks for writing!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[LinBin]

Honestly.....this is a lovely piece of writing with an importnat message; a gem of a poem, Thank you for sharing x

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[icelandicblue]

Encourage others the sermon I listened to today. I find the concept to be powerfully true. One small thing I think you might mean obtuse rather than abtruse. Sometimes the pain is so unbearable hope is drowned beneath tears but a kind word or affirmation can make the pain just a little less sharp.

[Akshat♥]

So true..thank you for your kind words:)

[topsyturvy]

Ahhh this piece is talking to me. No, practically screaming to get my life in check. It's a wake up call for some people, also it can inspire. I guess I'm not there yet but it will come in time.

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[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Phillitup]

Another finalist piece, I like this one too, you're so talented! :)
-Dell

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Ankita]

Optimism is the greatest strength of life. Your poem delivers this very important message alongwith the one of being hopeful and patient. This is very truly said that Life may not be as bad and hopeless as you think and that it may be something so beautiful to that other person who craves for it and for what you are privileged with. A very beautiful message through your poem which is nicely written and so beautifully presented with a good flow. Keep writing. :)

[Ankita]

P.S. I also like the way u have highlighted PEOPLE with different colours which I think(if I'm nt wrong) is to show that we come across people who have such different outlooks on life according to their own point of view and that's what makes the world so colourful. So it's not that dark out there.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you very much for this beautiful review 😊

[Petals & Pearls]

Again, it struggles to rhyme and flow and falls flat... but possesses great thoughts and feelings.

[Akshat♥]

I feel that you are so much after rhyme and I personally don't go with rhyming thing...
Everyone writes in their own way..thank you for reading

[junaid altaf]

courage is the glucose of life
and if we neglect its use we surely will succumb............
and the way u have put it
it is splendid..........................

[Akshat♥]

Thank you Junaid :)

[junaid altaf]

welcome