Be Positive

we waste our lives thinking what will happen next and we never try to be happy at present...

 
The way you see the world might be different than others

Life is tough you feel 

People are obtuse you think

Living in this way might bring you down

Try to learn from the things you see around

Everyone has some kind of difficulties in life

Live with a positive frame of mind

If you try to make everyone happy 

eventually that happiness comes back to you

Help someone in need because you will never know

Don't crush yourself from inside 

You hate your life,

while someone dreams of having your life

You need to be strong

You need to be calm

You will get everything with time

Author's Note

Honest views please...I appreciate your time :)
rate it also :)

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

"People"

1. I love the R a i n b o w effect of deliciousness. For me, the Rainbow refers to the following:

(1) Gay Rights
(2) Unity
(3) Art

PICTURE

1. EXCELLENT source of inspiration! It makes us feel something rather than pity. It makes us feel...connected.

"strong"

1. The blue color represents:

(1) Strength
(2) Calm
(3) Beauty

FONT OF CHOICE

(1) Orange tends to be about summer and amazing suns.

MUSIC SUGGESTIONS for HAPPYNESS

1. Sublime
2. Ballyhoo
3. Slightly Stoopid

"You will get everything with time"

1. Excellent message!
2. We all tend to feel fear.
3. We all tend to feel self-pity.
4. We all tend to feel sadness
5. We all... will r i s e up!

VOCABULARY I ENJOYED:

1. Happy: Gives positivity :)
2. Abstruse: It gives the poem intelligence.
3. Dreams: It gives us hope!

CONCLUSION

1. Mission accomplished!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Vria P Crow]

You are welcome:D

[Akshat♥]

No problem heart hacker lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

LMAO HAHAHAHAHA So much love in the air like a little Harry Potter snare:P

[Akshat♥]

I wish to become little harry Rofl :D

[Vria P Crow]

dirty harry

[Vria P Crow]

:P

[Akshat♥]

not a dirty one...just a sweet one lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

We need an instant messaging system here:P

[Akshat♥]

Someone please add a messaging system here :P

[realmwriter]

I needed a positive reminder today, thank you for that. It was enjoyable to read...!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[realmwriter]

Your very welcome...!

[CreativeStroke]

A nice, positive write. I enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing this one!

[Akshat♥]

thank you:)

[quinfinn]

i think you have reminded people of the basic desires of life and to be more accepting of others and appreciative of themselves and to make the best of the gifts the maker has endowed you with...nicely worded and well expressed

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much:)

[quinfinn]

welcome

[Jaweena...Eileen Quinta..]

Those are wise thoughts penned. I love your picture-it is always good to remind yourself of the important, simple, basic goals in life! nizhoni.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A positive look at some of emotions greatest weapons, well done, good read.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Great poem great message

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Dayran]

A great attitude Akshat, well conveyed.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Frieda P]

Life is indeed difficult, more so for some than others. If we see it through the eyes of a child, then anything is possible. The message to be kind and accepting stands out in this read, nicely pen'd.

[Akshat♥]

rightly said...thank you :)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure :-)

[David Scott]

An encouraging write and I think it can be true. It is up to the reader to decide this fate. Thank you for this reminder and perspective.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you...

[Sanjana.N.D]

nice poem!!!truly really strong!!!! :)...

[Akshat♥]

thank you :)