Be Positive

we waste our lives thinking what will happen next and we never try to be happy at present...

 
The way you see the world might be different than others

Life is tough you feel 

People are obtuse you think

Living in this way might bring you down

Try to learn from the things you see around

Everyone has some kind of difficulties in life

Live with a positive frame of mind

If you try to make everyone happy 

eventually that happiness comes back to you

Help someone in need because you will never know

Don't crush yourself from inside 

You hate your life,

while someone dreams of having your life

You need to be strong

You need to be calm

You will get everything with time

Author's Note

Honest views please...I appreciate your time :)
rate it also :)

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

"People"

1. I love the R a i n b o w effect of deliciousness. For me, the Rainbow refers to the following:

(1) Gay Rights
(2) Unity
(3) Art

PICTURE

1. EXCELLENT source of inspiration! It makes us feel something rather than pity. It makes us feel...connected.

"strong"

1. The blue color represents:

(1) Strength
(2) Calm
(3) Beauty

FONT OF CHOICE

(1) Orange tends to be about summer and amazing suns.

MUSIC SUGGESTIONS for HAPPYNESS

1. Sublime
2. Ballyhoo
3. Slightly Stoopid

"You will get everything with time"

1. Excellent message!
2. We all tend to feel fear.
3. We all tend to feel self-pity.
4. We all tend to feel sadness
5. We all... will r i s e up!

VOCABULARY I ENJOYED:

1. Happy: Gives positivity :)
2. Abstruse: It gives the poem intelligence.
3. Dreams: It gives us hope!

CONCLUSION

1. Mission accomplished!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Vria P Crow]

You are welcome:D

[Akshat♥]

No problem heart hacker lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

LMAO HAHAHAHAHA So much love in the air like a little Harry Potter snare:P

[Akshat♥]

I wish to become little harry Rofl :D

[Vria P Crow]

dirty harry

[Vria P Crow]

:P

[Akshat♥]

not a dirty one...just a sweet one lol :D

[Vria P Crow]

We need an instant messaging system here:P

[Akshat♥]

Someone please add a messaging system here :P

[AYVID N]

Honestly, no words! It's really good. Pen on!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Salar Majak]

i love your way of colors! they're so effective! and the girl's picture adds up to the sotry of the poem perfectly! great write!! wonderful! my favourite of the day :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[larryb]

Nice write..in our crazy world this touching poem makes it seem less harsh and crazy :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This is a poem with a lovely and uplifting message

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Morrigan Nicole]

Like success, failure is many things to many people. With Positive Mental Attitude, failure is a learning experience, a rung on the ladder, a plateau at which to get your thoughts in order and prepare to try again.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Jazique]

It was not bad at all, i meam i felt something could have been added, just not sure what.Anyways I love the message it gof across because when you think about things like this you also think about those who waste their life onand somethin dumb likedrinking, drugs, death and their some kidwho kulk for your life now matter how bad it us when the thing they hope for everday is to live another day by not dying from murder, riot, bad water, malnutrition and hundred ways People must understand no matter how hard life gets, you're still lucky to be alive bc their is always a chance things will get better. Anyways i really enjoyed your poem , well done

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much :)

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*stands up clapping* YES!!!! :D *sits back down before i fall down over nothing* Anyways that was so beautiful and so true, i love the poem it inspired me so much ^^ Thank you for sharing this! This was a real treat :D WOOT WOOT! :P

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much :)

[Natasha]

very positive and uplifting poem-agree with everything you said. we all as humans should try to see the brighter side, and realize things can ALWAYS be worse.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much :)

[Silhouette]

Wow, truly inspirational, words to live by. thank you so much for penning :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much :)

[MandaBear]

Wonderful write. I really like "You need to be strong You need to be calm You will get everything with time". Good advice =]

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much :)