I Need A Hug

Sometimes we feel sad ...so we need a hug after that things will get better..

If You need me
Show me the way to see

People lie
People getting hurt
It's just the way things are

Sit beside me
Hold my hands tight
See the future of us in my eyes

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Your arms just feel like home
You can't express with just a tone

You make me feel real
The look on you face
The sadness in your eyes
Just shows the nature of you

Your love is so pure
You make me feel safe
No one come and take your place

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Sometimes you just need to forget everything

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Alicia Schroeder]

Straight from the heart.. Very touching peice.. Well done :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Alicia Schroeder]

:) yw..

[Leslie Philibert]

Good poem that exudes honesty and emotion,

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Larry Dyson]

together ness is like the warm blanket we snuggle late at night ....fear is the aloneness...removal from fear is the objective..share my fear and transform it...LAURY

[Akshat♥]

:)

[stars are far]

that was so like my days ..i can so relate to that .
well done :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Akshat♥]

Please Describe what you feel after reading this poem....

[Norma M Sutton]

This flows like a song. I like it.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Helen Crutchett]

Your lovely, heartfelt poem inspired me just then to send a Teddy Bear hug to all our poets in the Blue Rose Cafe.

Hope he cheers you up! When I feel like that and can't get a hug, I wrap myself in a blanket, make a nice cup of tea, put my feet up and look upward to the stars and imagine the whole universe hugging me.

[Akshat♥]

no doubt..he cheers me up...thank you:)

[Soul Fire]

i really like this! so true! Great work!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Loner]

A truly heart felt poem and everyone"s voice too.
A hug can surely take away all the pain from us when
its given from a lover..... Great write.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Loner]

U are welcome.