I Need A Hug
A Poem by
Akshat♥
Sometimes we feel sad ...so we need a hug
after that things will get better..
If You need me Show me the way to see People lie People getting hurt It's just the way things are Sit beside me Hold my hands tight See the future of us in my eyes I just feel sad tonight Tears are flowing from my eyes I just need a hug Your arms just feel like home You can't express with just a tone You make me feel real The look on you face The sadness in your eyes Just shows the nature of you Your love is so pure You make me feel safe No one come and take your place I just feel sad tonight Tears are flowing from my eyes I just need a hug Sometimes you just need to forget everythingVIDEO
© 2013 Akshat♥
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Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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aww,so sweet
I need a hug right now after reading this:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
aww,so sweet
I need a hug right now after reading this:)
11 Years Ago
Thank you :)
well I am a huger. good poem 100/100
Posted 11 Years Ago
well I am a huger. good poem 100/100
11 Years Ago
Thats really nice:)
wow,i need a hug right now..
thanks for sharing it!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
wow,i need a hug right now..
thanks for sharing it!!
Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB
Posted 11 Years Ago
Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
very touching, i like this i think i need a hug sometimes too. i sometimes go through depression and it feels like i really need one.
Posted 11 Years Ago
very touching, i like this i think i need a hug sometimes too. i sometimes go through depression and it feels like i really need one.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
yes,you are right...thank you:)
11 Years Ago
your welcome =)
*two thumbs way up*
Posted 11 Years Ago
*two thumbs way up*
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
You're welcome :)
Beautiful! I want to give you a hug now after reading this poem. *hugs* Sometimes a hug does more than words could ever do. Great poem! 100%
Posted 11 Years Ago
Beautiful! I want to give you a hug now after reading this poem. *hugs* Sometimes a hug does more than words could ever do. Great poem! 100%
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much...means a lot to me :)
wondeful - yea its true - sometimes, a good hug can make you forget pain.
Posted 11 Years Ago
wondeful - yea its true - sometimes, a good hug can make you forget pain.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you :)
Sad but filled with anticipation of longing :) Great one:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Sad but filled with anticipation of longing :) Great one:)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you :)
Absolutely loved this! :)
~Erinne
Posted 11 Years Ago
Absolutely loved this! :)
~Erinne
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much dear:)
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Added on September 5, 2012
Last Updated on July 26, 2013
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Akshat♥ New Delhi, India
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You can call me (or ashu),
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