I Need A Hug

Sometimes we feel sad ...so we need a hug after that things will get better..

If You need me
Show me the way to see

People lie
People getting hurt
It's just the way things are

Sit beside me
Hold my hands tight
See the future of us in my eyes

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Your arms just feel like home
You can't express with just a tone

You make me feel real
The look on you face
The sadness in your eyes
Just shows the nature of you

Your love is so pure
You make me feel safe
No one come and take your place

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Sometimes you just need to forget everything

Author's Note

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Your review means a lot to me..

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[beautiful life]

This poem is so emotional..it touched be deep
You have a talent in writing poems
Keep writing my friend :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Dakshta]

A hug, a simple hug can take away all of our pain and fear...A really nice write :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Dakshta]

welcome :)

[Akshat♥]

;)

[Vikrantsingh]

*Jappi* Pa dost...
Such a wonderful. Jappi is way ton a medicine
You get what yo want when you pull someone close intact and feel those essence and those moments you ask god to stop those tickling clocks and those heart pulse.
Simply way ahead and amazingly expressed :)

Will go through you art of work.

Cheers!!
Singh :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you ji...you made me smile :D

[Vikrantsingh]

;)

[Akshat♥]

hmm :D

[Vikrantsingh]

*Hugs*

[Akshat♥]

Hugs (^_^)

[Vikrantsingh]

Yea :D

[Chandrika Konwar]

A hug is d physical acknowedgement of love and care..
u penned down the passionate side of a hug wich connects me immediately..

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Charu Charms]

No show off, no ornamentation... Simple yet sweet. Right from the heart. Its a raw masterpiece.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Charu Charms]

you're most welcome!

[smilempsn]

^-^ That piece was amazing.... How sometime just a Hug, tells more than our words can explain...
A Hug to a friend whom you meet after long time..

Beautifully captured the feelings..!!
Surely I need a hug rite now......

[Akshat♥]

I will give you one..no prob. about that...thank you :)

[smilempsn]

:P I need a real one :P

[Akshat♥]

come to my home lol..

[smilempsn]

..hehe.. :P

[Zoya]

actually i like your writing.....
it is so good
good thoughts
good way of writing..
feels like true writing from the heart

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much dear..means a lot to me :)

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes..
like these lines...adoring :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Prritiy]

there is no one who doesn't need a hug anytime :). sweet poem full of feelings.

[Akshat♥]

i like spreading love...thank you :)

[Prritiy]

welcome :)

[Glee]

Your poetry is deep, however I sense a depressing tone of sadness and hurting. It would do better to take a more optimistic perspective, just my view.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)