I Need A Hug

Sometimes we feel sad ...so we need a hug after that things will get better..

If You need me
Show me the way to see

People lie
People getting hurt
It's just the way things are

Sit beside me
Hold my hands tight
See the future of us in my eyes

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Your arms just feel like home
You can't express with just a tone

You make me feel real
The look on you face
The sadness in your eyes
Just shows the nature of you

Your love is so pure
You make me feel safe
No one come and take your place

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Sometimes you just need to forget everything

Author's Note

Please review and rate it too:)
Your review means a lot to me..

Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Ravyne Hawke]

I like the lulling rhythm of this piece. I love the repetition of "I need a hug" through out it too. You even used some imagery with this line:

See the future of us in my eyes

And a simile with this line:

Your arms just feel like home

This is what I mean by "show me" writing. You did this quite well in this piece, but I would still like to see more. I know you have it in you. Great poem!

[Akshat♥]

I know I can...But I don't know deep English...metaphors and all!!
I just right from heart and try not to make any grammatical errors :P
Thank you dear for your review :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

have you tried writing with a translator (online kind)? You could always correct any strange grammatical errors that popped up from the translation.. might make it easier for you to express things in a more metaphorical manner.

[Akshat♥]

Where to find it online..just give me a link?

[Ravyne Hawke]

what is the language you write in?

[Akshat♥]

English

[Chiradeep Patra]

Emotions expressed beautifully here in this poem. Keep it up... And yes, thanks for the add...

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :) You are welcome for the add thing :)

[Jack...]

Beautiful poem, so very touching and filled with need.

"Your arms just feel like home" I loved this line. It truly says it all.

[Akshat♥]

I am glad that you liked it:)
Thank you dear :)

[Atrocious Wind]

its beautifully written..
quite sensitive!!
love it!!!!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Krystal17]

This is my favourite

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear..means a lot to me :)

[Zahra]

True emotions. And really sometimes all we need is the support of a dear one to become as strong as possible again. Liked your poem.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Ency Bearis]

Words of wisdom, you're good at this an insightful one.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear..means a lot to me :)

[Ency Bearis]

you're welcome

[Geralyn Miller]

Your use of language is precise and delicate, your imagery is crafted with care. Nicely done.

[Akshat♥]

thank you:)

[Pax]

sometimes a hug makes a difference ~ just to feel those embrace... comforting us is just enough to feel that we are not alone in our problems ~

nice work Akshat♥ !

[Akshat♥]

Yeah right!
Thank you dear :)

[Pax]

your most welcome :)

[Akshat♥]

;)

[Aidz]

I like this, its not in my face, its simple wording, its even soothing :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)