I Need A Hug

Sometimes we feel sad ...so we need a hug after that things will get better..

If You need me
Show me the way to see

People lie
People getting hurt
It's just the way things are

Sit beside me
Hold my hands tight
See the future of us in my eyes

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Your arms just feel like home
You can't express with just a tone

You make me feel real
The look on you face
The sadness in your eyes
Just shows the nature of you

Your love is so pure
You make me feel safe
No one come and take your place

I just feel sad tonight
Tears are flowing from my eyes
I just need a hug
Sometimes you just need to forget everything

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Buddhistboy73]

Again, there is such compassion and sensitivity in your poems.....a real deep sense of wanting to take care of someone reading this....:)
And the line of the poem is simple, yet contains such meaning...."I just need a hug"...love it, and yes sometimes that is all we need....kinda welling up a little myself reading this if I'm honest....;)
Great write
BB

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Coffee Vampier]

As you can see you are getting a lot out of this poem not just the emotion. If you keep this up someday you'll never be old, sad, and, or alone. I see you could take writing as a carrier and you'd do really well. Keep it up.

[E.P. Robles]

LA CATEDRAL

Hail the uncompleted verse, in its state so diverse,
Within the lines it bides, for its moment to immerse,
A saga unresolved, a tale of noir and mist,
Woven into clarity, till its essence truly kissed.

Among metaphoric whispers, it wanders, seeks and lingers,
Words elusive, fleeting, like ephemeral singers,
Past rhymes have had their say, yet this one hesitates,
Questing for its resolution, as time oscillates.

Resting on imperfect beats, where irregularity meets,
Time becomes its partner, as patience softly greets,
Struggling through the maze, where fragments intertwine,
The unfinished rhyme persists, till its stars align.

Finally, the awaited instance gleams, as reality redeems,
The rhyme declares its truth, fulfilling its destined themes,
Contentment finds its way, a sublime, sweet release,
Unfurling its wings of words, soaring with newfound peace.

:: 08.09.2023 ::

[Kriti Singh]

It's from deep of heart... A true feeling and a real need.. So beautifully scribbled...

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Sometimes you really need a hug.You have penned this so splendidly Akshat :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

i feel the sadness you express in this poem...i need a hug too...let's just hug each other

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[topsyturvy]

Sometimes a hug is all we truly need, and I applaud you for asking and for knowing when you need help and support. :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[GreenSkeleton16]

yeah exactly. sometimes i just need a hug....a lot of the time actually.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[~VertoAtrum~]

Heart-wrenching, and beautiful. Great job

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Nivedita...]

Its nice one love can express in this way also......its just touching.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)