Drip Drip

Drip Drip

A Poem by Akotlah
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Crying

"

Drip... Drip...

Silence takes over

Drip... Drip...

Ripped at the seams

 

Drip... Drip...

No lucky clover

Drip... Drip...

Silence now screams

 

Drip... Drip...

Well what do you know?

Drip... Drip...

My face rather wet

 

Drip... Drip...

Rolling down slow

Drip... Drip...

There's no ocean yet?

 

Drip... Drip...

Drowning in emotion

Drip... Drip...

To smiles goodbye

 

Drip... Drip...

To sadness devotion

Drip... Drip...

For now, I'll just cry!

© 2012 Akotlah


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Cleverly written and structured. Rhymes are good, rhythm is good, poem is good. "Is there no ocean yet?" Good write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Akotlah
Akotlah

newcastle, nsw, Australia



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