deathly mark

deathly mark

A Poem by Akotlah
"

read this after "feed" and theres a story line

"
Deathly mark
Painfully true
And now its dark
Because of YOU!

© 2012 Akotlah


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Ky
Short and sweet. Keep this you may be able to expand on it in the future. It has a very good beginning

Posted 13 Years Ago


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 Added on August 21, 2011
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Akotlah
Akotlah

newcastle, nsw, Australia



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