Questions

average feelings

My questions, they are simple,

What is left for me and you?

I just dont want to hurt my parents,

Or my brothers two.

 

I ask myself, 'why bother?'

What else can i do?

When i harm myself,

Am i harming you?

 

Scratching, ripping, burning,

Guiltless guilt, is at my soul,

Am i going mental?

Or is my head, an empty hole?

 

Regret ever so coreless,

What wrongs have i done,

Everything, has crashed and burned,

Now lifes no longer fun!

Reviews

[Ama May Cooper]

What a raw poem. A very horrible feeling to detest oneself so much that we can lay harm to ourselves, deep and well represented.
I feel it could of been longer, and that you could of explored it more.. but all the same a very clear piece, a good strong flow through out

[zainul]

Yes,"Now lifes no longer fun!"
Amazing write.

[Ky]

It reads perhaps a little quick but that could just be me. And yet I get a strong sense of feeling from this piece. Well done