Today.

Today.

A Poem by AkoSiJcee
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My first poem, everrrr. :p

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Today.

I find today a 'too boring day.'
I don't wanna play, but I wanna go my way.
I find today so gloomy, but I find it really
Maybe more than really, somewhat happy.

Do you know why? 'cause I saw your name!
Even though I sound lame, what I've said ain't a game.
Even if in love I fell, I still could not tell,
Though I may not be fair, 
I think I ain't ready for this kind of affair.

A drama, this, you may think,
But ever since you gave me that wink-
What I felt in me, I had to keep.
I know that that something felt so deep.

What a lonely day.
Though you might be away,
I'll just lie down in my bed,
And think more of you ahead.

© 2012 AkoSiJcee


Author's Note

AkoSiJcee
If it's too shallow, please understand. It's my first. :')

And it's a free verse, one enjambment, no particular rhythm, childish rhyme scheme, informal language, rubbish.

Comments are appreciated. ;)
#MyFirsts

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It was adorable. You did a good job, just keep writing more and more, and it will be a piece of cake. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


It's a very good first poem! Keep writing and you will get even better!! :) Nice job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


AkoSiJcee

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)

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Added on November 20, 2012
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