Redemption

Roller-coaster ride

From Earth's bosom to the sky

This is how I die

Reviews

[Rahul]

"Rock bottom's legacy and John cena's redemption" that;s all what you reminded me by your this write.
lovely write and few words but powerfful almost.

[akihsna]

Haha I'm not a very WWWF person but thank you for the review! :)

[Trigorin]

Not bad. Haiku aren't strictly supposed to rhyme, but I personally don't think it matters that much. I like the reversal suggested in this piece and I think that the overall feeling is very nice. Good work.

[akihsna]

Yes, I'd say this is my personal haiku- writing style. Thank you very much for your review.