Taste of You

The orchestra of silence was playing in our vicinity

We enjoyed the taciturn colloquy in complete quietness

Our eyes were having a deep conversation notwithstanding

They grinned at mine and I smiled back blushing

Flibbertigibbets would keep away from and despise us

Happy-go-lucky were we so why would we care?

But then came the time when a mysterious love appeared excitedly

Magnetic lips of yours allured my slinky tongue 

Which trembling with shyness, found shelter in my muzzle

I looked away hoping for words to show up

When you unexpectedly steered my chin towards your face

And taking out your specs, you neared my mouth

Quenched that mutual longing we both had

Breathing looked customary yet we shared our puffs

I felt your thirst, You felt my desire

Your traveler tongue roamed about the road of my lips

Reached its destination yet kept on strolling

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Passionate and sensual piece of art, enjoyed the read

[Yash]

feelings are busting out of ur creation, good 1 n really appreciate ur work good going....

[Sourav]

Very well written sensual Poem. Great depiction.

[prashant harsh]

awsm it is

[Francis Danger]

"Flibbertigibbets" may be the best name of anything ever. i have no idea what it is or they are, but, i'll be damned if i don't plan on naming my next thing "Flibbertigibbets." so, emotive poem, good work, and thank you for the "Flibbertigibbets."

[akihsna]

Haha agreed! Plus it's funny to pronounce it. Oh thank you :)
P.s you could check it out here if you want to get acquainted with this word ;)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flibbertigibbet
And thanks for your review :)

[InsanityWriter]

Nice job. :)

[akihsna]

Thank you ^^

[Tai Ryens]

Just.. wow. It has a dark streak to it; yet everything about it shines with positivity. Especially the last two lines; darkly enticing and astonishing.

[akihsna]

: Oh thank you so much :) I'm glad you like it :)