Monster Chocolate.

Thy touch of sweetness
Upon my lips so soft

Gets me all exuberant
And I feel raised aloft.

Often brown art thou

Or seldom white,

Maybe black for some

But it's just alright.

Texture dost not count

As long as thou art thou!
Poured in a mug,

Resting in a cup,

Emit your hotness

And I swear I'm all yours.

Never could someone enthrall me

The way thy nectar enlaced my lips.

Like the bond between a bud and a bee

I'm not avoiding any of your sips.

Reviews

[Kieta!]

Lol I love this so much! :) Yay for chocolate!!!!!
I especially like the lines:

'Thy touch of sweetness
Upon my lips so soft'

and

'Poured in a mug,
Resting in a cup'

You should do something like this for ice cream too!!! :) Great job :) :)

[akihsna]

Aw thanks for the review Kieta! I'm definitely considering to write more about some popular foodstuff! So, stay tuned. Thanks again. ^^

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Excellent funny entry to my little contest. Think this might be in the final. Great.

[akihsna]

Haha thank you so much. Looking fwd to writing more food-related poetry. Thanks again sir!

[Imagine Blade]

Hahahahaha!

This is great! EXCELLENT!

Each line has a vivid and picturesque description.

It really feels like the chocolate is talking to me!

It also feels like I could taste the goodness we call chocolate while I was reading this. This is unique and quite special. This is the first time I read something like this because food is rarely a topic for poems or stories.

I love how you've written this.

Very well written like a pro.

Can you do more about other foods? Like lasagna or milkshake?
HAHAHAHA!

Thanks for this one. I had fun!

[akihsna]

: Thank you so much for your positive feedback Mr. Blade ^^ People like you will definitely encourage aspiring writers like me :)
And I'll be indeed glad to write more poems on food, since I'm a total food- lover.
Once again, thank you so-very-much :3

[Imagine Blade]

Don't mention it.
Keep writing! Don't give up!