An Imaginary Night

Moon is pretty, night is young.
Breezing a lot so please stay long.

Stuck in the bed, eyes open wide,

A word you said, out of shyness I hide.

Your fingers run across my arm,

Make me chuckle though it's of no harm.

Raindrops suddenly hammer the roof,

Never did I think the weather would be aloof!

Albeit the chill is taking its toll outside,

Hugs and cuddles make up for it inside.

Warming me up, you pinned me to the wall,

Got my heart shouting: "Yours, I'm all!"

Sweat drops find their way out of my skin.

Don't matter for it is only its kin.
Keep it going, let me turn monster.

Woo me, whip me! Let this be our breather.

Shake me up for I don't mind lust,
In small amounts seldom, will be just.

Mutual consent is not malice.

I am not naive, I am not Alice!

But now that it'll soon be dawn,

Know that you weren't my pawn.

If that is the start of a beautiful romance,

Why don't we dare and take the chance?

Reviews

[Amelie]

A most sensual and titillating poem weaved by innermost carnal desires... Grammar is flawless, and the use of language is spontaneous yet insightful. I've once read a poem in a folio I found in a pile of old paper rejects at home and your poem reminded me of it. I loved it so much; I tore the page and posted on my wall. Fantastic write, my friend.

[Pankaj Lohia]

indeed a feast of words crafted in a sensual yet romantic way :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Sensual, and yet not over the top. It is a rare thing to find this sort of pure comfort and anti-anxiety in a partner. You should count yourself as one of the lucky few, my friend. An apt ode to what seems a knowing and understanding lover.

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

Your love, is fortunate, indeed. I would avert my eyes but you have revealed nothing, revealed all. That there is a sense of quantum entanglement, for lack of better words or concepts, is remarkable. It is both scholarly and artistic; as in a chant of unison that belies the red lettering with which it is so brashly rendered. It is Babbet's Feast served in words. Delicious. :)