Fear

Try to walk a step ahead, they'll push you three back
Don't look up to the sky, It may turn black.
You run the life's race, they'll make you change your track
No matter how hard you try, you'll be back stabbed.

You fell for their words, gave up on your dream
Retreated and lost, your hopes gone dim
You're stuck inside your head, 
Helpless and numb,
you're scared, a coward you become

Why is that they always win?
Its your life, you don't have to give in.
Let them talk let them scream
You are strong, you just need to believe.
Fear not, design your fate
With your success, let the critics fade.

Reviews

[Zephaniah Devon]

Very good and very inspiring. I like that you're telling people not to listen to the haters, just shut them out and do what you want to do. I actually kinda needed to hear this today, so thank you :)

From a constructive criticism point of view I can't really think of much. Maybe if you made it a bit longer then that would be good. Like maybe talk about how hard it can be to not listen to the haters but that it can be done?

[Mitch]

Very encouraging. It's easy to let fear rule you in the face of those who would put you down. I like the line "fear not, design your fate". Indeed.