Admonish-By:Akeen V.

Amazement arises from within this obvious surprise.

Which is intelligence now means to be irrelevant

Those who are such endure stones of negligence,

Being harshly caste by society's precarious hands.

Causing book built shields of resilience,

To protect inside knowledge from outsiders ignorance.

 

Inattentiveness is societies new phase or style, which demands

They indulge within its cobwebbed corridors while knowing;

Nothing remotely enlightening can come forth from them;

In this case their feeble minds have neglected brilliance;

And instead fed upon unimpressive myths for guidance.

 

Like blind sheep into a hungry wolfs den,

Uncanny yet ubiquitous these absent-minded ones,

Accelerate ignorance's rapidly growing appetite,

Incidentally agitating his apparent delight.

 

Until this world comes to an end of days

Stupidity shall receive awarded praise.

As while acknowledgment of intelligence

Gets shunned astray by society's abstinence.

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

exceptional word choice to press through in sharp clarity the state of our society~ how sad that in the end it will be stupidity and the loss of concrete thinking that slays the species~
applause!!!

[Brad]

damn, bro, this is the shyte! i like your rhythm and the words you use cut through to the emotions. bravo

[Camille Corbett]

I'm loving your diction, dude. Very strong words. I'm liking it

[Marie Harrison]

Strong writing here. Powerful voice.

[C. Porter]

Gosh, I really like this. Totally an awesome message, and so true. Kudos and thanks for sharing!

[TTBoy28]

Nice! Sometimes it's not about true talent, but the popularity reigns supreme. Sad but true. Good job!

[Alexa Aiden]

So I've read some of your poems and have decided that I'm in a deep relationship with them! This is truly amazing!

[Melody-Rose;]

You're an excellent writer. It's a great poem. Keep it up :)

[The Water Queen]

Poweful message. The deceivers are out there and many will believe them. Great poem!

[Jeff]

What a powerful message that more people need to hear.