To:__ __

Her beauty is evident.

Her smile is heaven sent.

Her eyes are green.

Sincerity she gleams.

Her kindness is genuine.

Her fragrance is feminine.

Her hair is truly perfect.

No split ends dare hurt it.

Men's eyes always stare.

As she passes their air.

But only the flesh they see,

When her truth is beneath.

Her truth within shines,

So bright that it blinds.

But only few really know,

of this beauty, pure as snow.

What someone must show,

Hides beneath her glow.

A heart made of gold,

Now the world shall know.

Reviews

[*Evelen*]

Wow amazing poem. Well done.

[alan peter kelly]

lovely dedication to that intangible beauty transcendent of external aesthetics....some pretty turns of phrase and subtle ryhme scheme had me smiling warmly both outside and from within :)

[Jess Quna]

Great poem that describes the difference between outwards and inwards beauty and the importance of what lies beneath the surface... something most people sadly don't get.
Greetings,

Sarah

[loowzerX]

This poem can make any girl fall in love with you so easily hehe. great poem