To:__ __

Her beauty is evident.

Her smile is heaven sent.

Her eyes are green.

Sincerity she gleams.

Her kindness is genuine.

Her fragrance is feminine.

Her hair is truly perfect.

No split ends dare hurt it.

Men's eyes always stare.

As she passes their air.

But only the flesh they see,

When her truth is beneath.

Her truth within shines,

So bright that it blinds.

But only few really know,

of this beauty, pure as snow.

What someone must show,

Hides beneath her glow.

A heart made of gold,

Now the world shall know.

Reviews

[Madame Mystique]

Whoever this girl is she sure is lucky to have this poem dedicated to her :)
great words, great flow and great message :)

[Trevor]

I do like this one. My only problem with it is that sometimes it seems like you kind of stretch to make the rhyme. You pull away from the depth of the majority of the poem and add shallow bits so that the rhyme will work. All in all, though, I like it.

[Lynn Nicole]

I love this. This totally reminds me of someone I know.
This is beautiful! Def one of my favorites!

[Crinkle°]

oh, this one I find it absolutely beautiful, full of love and tenderness.

[Cassandra D.]

I really liked this.
It was nice and very descriptive. I also enjoyed the imagery.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Pure, and poetic. Great job.

[L.A.]

Wow, I really like this--how you described her beauty, inside and out. Every woman wishes she could have a man call her such endearing names :D

[Marie Harrison]

Sparkling gem of a poem you have written. Everyone woman dreams of such words.

[Ashleigh]

i really like this. i like how you described her physical beauty and her inner beauty. looks aren't everything. very beautifully described

[Ian Faraway]

This ones to me isn't it? :P Anyways, Loved This Poem!!!!!! For some reason I'm thinking scent instead of sent....like her scent (in the first stanza) kind of weird. Just saying, it's just me. Anyways, this describes a few girls I know pretty well, the ones I DON"T go after and actually get to know....well written.