To:__ __

Her beauty is evident.

Her smile is heaven sent.

Her eyes are green.

Sincerity she gleams.

Her kindness is genuine.

Her fragrance is feminine.

Her hair is truly perfect.

No split ends dare hurt it.

Men's eyes always stare.

As she passes their air.

But only the flesh they see,

When her truth is beneath.

Her truth within shines,

So bright that it blinds.

But only few really know,

of this beauty, pure as snow.

What someone must show,

Hides beneath her glow.

A heart made of gold,

Now the world shall know.

Reviews

[r]

This is so sweet and cute! I love the rhyming and the way it flows. :) It's so adorable. I also love how the title is, with the blanks where her name would fit.

[just rose.]

nice job with rhyme here. i like the delicacy of the description.

[Stephanie]

Aww, so sweet! This had a great flow and rythym. Very nicely done :)

[Lilly]

A simple yet beautiful piece. Very sweet...

[Daydreamer54]

Aw, veryu beautiful and sweet! i'm sure this girl ur talking about will love hearing this! Great write it's very poetic! :)

[The Analog Kid]

I like the title. It's like, fill in the blank. Very straightforward, yet beautiful at the same time.

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

I really enjoyed this. Very good. ... I really wish someone could write something like that about me! Amazing job.

[aphrodite61]

this is really good

[Bridget Mcmaken]

wow that is just Amazing! Really sweet!!! The flow of the poem is great. I love this poem sooo much! keep up the great writing.

[black.butterfly]

Aw that was so sweet. :)
Few things could sound better though like:

The eyes of men always stare,
as she passes through their air.

Nice work.