To:__ __

Her beauty is evident.

Her smile is heaven sent.

Her eyes are green.

Sincerity she gleams.

Her kindness is genuine.

Her fragrance is feminine.

Her hair is truly perfect.

No split ends dare hurt it.

Men's eyes always stare.

As she passes their air.

But only the flesh they see,

When her truth is beneath.

Her truth within shines,

So bright that it blinds.

But only few really know,

of this beauty, pure as snow.

What someone must show,

Hides beneath her glow.

A heart made of gold,

Now the world shall know.

Reviews

[Dingo the Archwizard of..]

I like how you were very indirect in your approach.

[Jessica Danielle]

This is a very good writing. I think you put a lot of detail in to this. I enjoyed it very much. It shows that you don't just care about what a person looks like, but you care about what that person is like on the inside.

[NCPanthersgurl]

This poem speaks loudly because you're relating highly to the subject matter. I'm unsure what the female in it is in relation to you, but you seem to know her well and want people to understand that a pretty face could mask an even more beautiful interior. That's a very good message to send. :)

[Denni]

Good job on this one! personally i love rhymes and the rhythm of this is great

[Tori]

The rhyme is very good, a lovely poem. Very dreamy. I like it

[Blossom]

I love this. flow is amazing. the rhyming is great, also the wording is wonderful. so beautiful

[I Am Svetlana]

I love the rhyming that was incorporated in this, it helped the flow. But it was very beautiful and i loved it! :) Nice job!

[alison13]

it's a simple yet lovely poem and i like the flow of it.great job :)

[the_stoic]

started off wonderfully but in the midst the rhyming seemed to be a bit forced .. the attributes of this angelic women is worth portraying and you have succeeded in doing that