Kabhi Kabhi Mere Dil Mein Khayal Aata Hai: Meri Vyatha

This is what I'm thinking!!!!

Kabhi kabhi mere dil mein khayal aata hai,
Fir jaane mujhe kya ho jata hai?

'Gyaan', agar zindagi ka aadhar hai,
Toh kyun insaan neev hilata hai?

'Maa', agar zindagi ki raah hai,
Toh kyun insaan dagmaga jata hai?

'Pita', agar zindagi ke margdarshak hain,
Toh kyun insaan bhatak jata hai?

'Guru', agar zindagi mein marg-sangi hain,
Toh kyun insaan bhool jata hai?

Kabhi kabhi mere dil mein khayal aata hai,
Fir jaane mujhe kya ho jata hai?

'Vishwas', agar zindagi ki dor hai,
Toh kyun insaan dhokha khata hai?

'Rishte', agar zindagi ke dhaage hain,
Toh kyun insaan deewar ban jata hai?

'Prem', agar zindagi ka saar hai,
Toh kyun insaan bairi ho jata hai?

'Vartamaan', agar zindagi ka mool hai,
Toh kyun insaan bhavishya banata hai?

Kabhi kabhi mere dil mein khayal aata hai,
Fir jaane mujhe kya ho jata hai?

'Dhan' agar zindagi mein manu-mail hai,
Toh kyun insaan jhukta jata hai?

'Moh', agar zindagi mein maaya hai,
Toh kyun insaan andha ho jata hai?

'Krodh', agar zindagi mein jwala hai,
Toh kyun insaan, insaan ko jalata hai?

'Lobh', agar zindagi mein kadvaahat hai,
Toh kyun insaan zehar peeta jata hai?

Kabhi kabhi mere dil mein khayal aata hai,
Fir jaane mujhe kya ho jata hai?

'Tyaag', agar zindagi ki mithaas hai,
Toh kyun insaan nahi kar pata hai?

'Daan', agar zindagi ki bhalai hai,
Toh kyun insaan ahenkaari ho jata hai?

'Izzat', agar zindagi ki kamai hai,
Toh kyun insaan ise ganva deta hai?

'Maut', agar zindagi ki sachchai hai,
Toh kyun insaan jeeta chala jata hai?

Reviews

[horizon]

Zindagi me ye sari chize mehsus krne k baad hi likhi gae h...jb tk insan khud in jazbato se guzar nhi jata tab tak use pta nhi chalta ke kis chiz ka kya mol h...bht h gehri soch se likha gya h in shabdon ko...bht badhiya

[Amit Dhiman]

Thanks a lot... What's your name?
#AD

[horizon]

What's in name...;)

[horizon]

My pen name is horizon....

[Amit Dhiman]

Shakespeare: What's in name??? I like ur attitude... Thanks horizon ji....

[horizon]

It's my pleasure sir...the poem was really an award winning I think you should mail it to Mr.Amitabh Bachhan he'll surely like it...

[Amit Dhiman]

How could I???

[horizon]

I don't know this at moment but I'll try find a way...try tweeter...tweet him

[Amit Dhiman]

Good Idea thanks for ur support...

[horizon]

I am glad...

[Anindita Janhabee]

Saayad isiliye hum isse zindagi kehte hain.....
Hum manushya hain, asadharan....
We are humans for that purpose or else we'd have been gods today...
And this is the reality of the world... No matter what happens, all that goes on is time...
Samay kisi ko nhi dekhta... chalta jata hai... acha ho ya phir bura....
wase hi, hum manushya hain, chalte Jane ka aadesh samay hame deta hai...
aur hum bas chalte hi jaate hain... acha waqt, bura waqt... sab ko piche chod ke chalte hi jaate hain...........

too nice poem Amit ji...
I'm glad to read this one...
after a long time some stuff in Hindi...
wow yaar .... you hit the point...
Anindita...

[Amit Dhiman]

Thanks Anindita ji

[Anindita Janhabee]

My pleasure reading this piece...

[Kushala Shanubhog]

Zindagi ki Kathin sachhaaiyon Ko aur Jeevan ka uddesh Ko itni achhi tarah pesh Kiya Gaya hi..Aapka bahuth badha dhanyawaad...badii samay ke Baad aapki vajah se acchi Hindi lekh padhi hoon

[Amit Dhiman]

Thanks Kushala ji