original! but lacked heart and emotion which is what poetry is all about.
after fast for- u should've written 22. lol
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks!! And you take the "Fast Forward" as a chapter? It has only a paragraph. lol xD
Also, .. read moreThanks!! And you take the "Fast Forward" as a chapter? It has only a paragraph. lol xD
Also, did you read all my chapters so far? If so, wow, thanks! I never thought people actually liked it enough to keep reading.