My Other Half

Me trying to write love poems and /failing/....

Every smile that crosses your lips touches my heart  

Your eyes fill me with soul I didn't know I was missing  

Each of your fingers count the times my heart skips a beat 

My body would collapse without you holding the strings 

My breath would stop without your hand, giving me warmth  

But how do I tell you how much you mean to me 

You're my blankets, my pillow, my sky, my only aroma 

I'm surrounded by your smell, I'm tied up by your laugh 

I can't shake off the feeling that you're the one

I can't replace the thoughts of you with anyone else 

You're the clouds to my night sky.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Doesn't seem like you're
failing to me this was love romantic
Lovely sweet and a longing heart
Hungry for love.


Very Romantic and
Soft and sweet.

I can't replace the thoughts of you with anyone else
You're the clouds to my night sky.



I'm a hopeless romantic
So I write romantic love
and sensual passionate
intimate romantic poetry.


I write a variety but
not erotic
Or haiku poetry
Short stories repetition
and rhyme if it happens
and free verse everything
Inspires me.


This was beautifully penned.