Flutter

Can you find the hidden message?

Her smiles make my heart flutter

And every whisper she utters

Makes me blush and stutter

Summer, winter, spring and autumn

I only enjoy it when she is with me

I only treasure each moment if she is

Living 

Only treasure each breath if I can

View her 

Especially the smile she genuinely gives

Unintentionally making me giggle like a kid

Author's Note

I have failed at trying to rhyme, but at least I put a hidden message :D

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for love my friend. Best days are when someone make our heart dance and flutter. Thank you Akashi for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Akashi]

Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Leslie Philibert]

Clever write, nice thoughts.

[Akashi]

Thank you for reading

[zaisham9393]

love ...such a sweet overwhelming feeling.
Thank You for sharing this beautiful poetry:))!

[Akashi]

Aw! Thank you for reading :)

[iamshadowine]

I really the way you started each sentence with the the letters of ' I love u'. Its quite an innovative one!
Keep writing :)

[Akashi]

Thank you for reading! Tbh I was worried since I didn't rhyme well and it didn't have a good pattern ;-; I'm glad someone liked it