In Love With an Angel

Short poem

I'm madly in love with an angel I know

She ties her hair back in summer

And lets it down when it snows

Reviews

[Cara]

nice one. i like it
it is simple but amazing
thank you for sharing

[Akashi]

Thank you!

[Kat Mandu]

Interesting. Short and sweet, sometimes less is more, and you've demonstrated that perfectly.

[Akashi]

Thank you!

[Misty Blue Eyes]

This is captured beautifully. Outstanding job using words

[Akashi]

Thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

A perfect poem. Perfect use of description. Thank you Akashi for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Akashi]

And thank you for viewing and reviewing :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Yurie Lee]

Huuuuuuu hair up in the summer and down in the winter~ Huuhuuhuu that makes me wonder what the meaning behind it is~

I like this poem~ Short and has me left wondering what you mean~

Niceu poem~

[Akashi]

Thank you.

[Leslie Philibert]

I really like, direct, true words that work brillantly ! ( you don`t need the bold font, it works thanks to the universality of the message) Great.

[Akashi]

Thank you for reading.

[Bluefire]

Nice, very peaceful and sunny.
Well done!

[Akashi]

Thank you :)

[Bluefire]

No problem

[streetrose]

Short, but beautiful, thank you for sharing :)

[Akashi]

Thank you for reading.

[Arooj Purra]

nice sense of humour ...

[Akashi]

Thanks for reading :)

[freaksheet]

I know how you feel! #^.^#