CALM DOWN

......this is going to turn in to violence......

Falling into a plate of colors,

Swim in a pool of sensation,

Run around like there's no such thing,

As pain and sorrow and crying.

Pace across a long rainbow,

Touch the sky and fly atop a crow.

Close your eyes,

They've been opened too much to real life.

Dream away into your own world,

Discard the angry bitter souls.

Don't hide from fantasy,

Don't hide from happy.

Jump atop planets and stars,

Bring the joy where ever you are.

Forget the aching heart aches,

Jump across vanilla lakes.

Roll around in everyone's love,

Jump until you hit above.

Tie yourself in golden ribbons,

Forget sadness and just have fun.

Author's Note

Reminds me a bit of J-Hope or Chanyeol. XD Always happy!

Reviews

[MandaBear]

This is really good. Starting out dark then easing into light very inspirational and I can see how it reminds you of J-hope and Chanyeol =) Great stuff

[Akashi]

Thanks! :3

[CRZ]

If feel like this when I'm creating music. Good write. Chillaxxxxx

[Akashi]

Thank you a lot.

[Tea]

It's very creative, I enjoyed reading it. :) Great job.

[Akashi]

Thank you.

[Tea]

Your welcome.

[Senorita]

It's beautiful... I liked it...

[Akashi]

Thank you very much.

[Blissful Sin]

Inspirational and optimistic! I can use this once in a while!
I enjoyed this.

-Bliss

[Akashi]

Oh, thank you so much, Bliss!

[one sky]

From dark to light... I like this concept. You have to forget the gloom and just enjoy life...be happy.

Inspirational. Well done!

[Akashi]

Thank you so very much!

[InsanityWriter]

Very nice. :) I really enjoyed reading this one! ^_^

[Akashi]

Thank you.

[SasuSakuLoVer]

Sadness that turns into happiness, I love it!

[Akashi]

Thank you!

[smilempsn]

that is a happy poem..
words like 'colors...swim...touch the sky..close your eyes...Bring the joy..Jump across vanilla lakes..roll around in everyone's love....Golden ribbons....'

And last but not the least 'Forget Sadness and just have fun'

..wOOw.. all so nicely wrapped to Calm down each of us..

Living day by day, we just forget to Smile.. Have fun..
this one surely remind us to Enjoy life to fullest :)


ThankU for Sharing this wonderful piece Akashi.. ^-^

[Akashi]

Thank you!

[Zahra]

Very nice inspirational poem, nice visuals.

[Akashi]

Thanks.