CrItIcS

i am to sick and tired of people judging my writing based on one error that means they just HAVE to write three paragraphs on how mediocre and unimpressive it is

i hate you
every f*****g one of you
do you like my vocabulary?
oh i know its s****y

whoops i just cursed again
i don't care if that's a sin
are you staying up for hours
working on a piece that withers away like flowers

because it isn't good enough for you
oh and who are you
no one
your done

i won't listen to it
tired of the s**t

f**k the critics

Author's Note

Don't like?
Don't fucking comment then

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Sometimes we need to write what's in our heart in order to release the anger or pain... You have vividly expressed your frustrations in this Piece... I hope it gives you peace after you've released it...

[dontwakeme]

Wow. You tell them Aka! I like this piece and I'm sick of them too.

[AHHHHHHHH! Heath.]

Couldn't agree more. Art is expressive and meant to be from the soul and if someone doesn't like, leave it be, we have freedom to do that too.

[mariah]

i love it, its what i think when someone gives me a completly negative comment! but i must tell you it is not a sin to swear. great job, my friend!
-mariah

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

No. I don't aprove of cussing at all. This is a very mediocre and unimpressive piece of writing. First off, you were very sinful with all that vulgar and inappropriate language.

Your "i"s weren't capitalized either. None of your poor sentences started with a capital letter and the poetry really stinks. The only good thing about it is that you made it rhyme. Some sentences weren't even complete.

I only approve of dictionary words and most cussing you ased finds no place in the dictionary. It is just insulting me and I won't stand for it. Also, it only rhymed sometimes. The grammar is all incorrect and I must say that, as a whole, this piece was utterly disdainful.


JUST KIDDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!