Fear

a poem for my girlfriend speaking of my nightmares

Fear of losing her
of being alone again
losing my one and only

sometimes i dream
about my worst fear
how awful that would be

so i confide in her
speaking of it all
everything i saw

she tells me not to worry
not fully ending my fear
all i have is hope

Author's Note

anything

Reviews

[Eli.Klinger]

This poem speaks very clearly and expresses the feeling of the unknown and fear quite simply. Good work. May want to revise the ending, but overall very well.

[Ezekiel Silver]

Great poem! Sends a very clear message. Keep up the good work!!

[Rante_Anglin]

I can relate to that feeling, short but effective :)

[dontwakeme]

I love the third and forth stanza, especially "not fully ending my fear - all I have is hope". That is so true. When I'm frightened I am going to lose someone close to me, I feel I have only hope to cling to.