Rain

Rain

A Poem by Aka_Kitsune
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just a haiku i wrote after a night of heavy rain :)

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Rain rain i love you
wash away my chronic pain
like you always do...

© 2012 Aka_Kitsune


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Aka_Kitsune
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what a nice haiku ^_^
the rain always makes me feel better! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


"A Deucalione Aeteron" beat me to my original comment! Ahhh! Lol.

Regardless I like this poem, it's uplifting to imagine the rain as a cleansing mechanism.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Here comes the rain! Rain, rain, rain here it comes!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Tears of joy are the rain to wash away chronic pain. Lovely.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Despite some small grammatical errors, this is very nice. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Rain has a wonderful way of soothing the soul, and taking away pain or sorrow... Lovely Haiku.

Posted 12 Years Ago


its interesting:) i hope all your pain goes away!! i am here for you :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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