War

wrote this in algebra...ya i can't concentrate lately

Take a look
this world is shrouded in war
what has that accomplished?

Nuclear bombs popping up in more places
thinking they will store them with their other aces
fool just knock your crap off!

this aint just poetry
i am warning all you fuckers
our world will end in war

Author's Note

anything guys?

Reviews

[Ezekiel Silver]

This is an intriguing poem. While most people wouldn't see this as educational I see it as an important fact of life. Nice work!!

[exotic flotsam]

You've touch upon a most basic optimism: that we ought to spend out time using our acquired civility, decency and humanity. War begets more. Mindless. Tediuous, and their lives never fulfilled. Unknown gifts bestowed upon us all, unless they die and never get the chance to give, learn and become part of us. I've a couple of similarly penned Haiku. Thanks for reading my work.

[Silver_Anime]

great poem :)
this is very true. i never understand how war can solve issues of any kind. it never works Dx