Envy

i wrote this poem the same night i wrote "Enough" hope you like

Girls crowd them
love surrounds them
priveleges encircle them
pure joy dances around them
expensive things entertain them
money fills them
this i used to envy.

Girls dump them
love leaves them
priveleges are cast away from them
no joy is near them
expensive things break by them
money is not as existing to them
this i used to envy?

Funny how the tables hath turned
is it not?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Mockingbird]

goes to show that those people don't have it good behind their facades. they are vulnerable too and not immune to the bad things in life. great observations.

[Denied in Truth]

I love it.... :)