Nuisances

Nuisances

A Poem by Aka_Kitsune
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I just had to get this out...

"
Hate me
love me
fight me
adore me
attack me
but you can't destroy me

you chose an option
like i really care
just another hater
trashing my reputation
since they have nothing better
in their worthless life

so when i finally get on my feet again
i have you all insulting me
calling me this and calling me that
your not even in this
come on man what did i do to you
no really tell me what i did

exactly not a thing at all
but trash me all you want
when i see you all
no doubt i am swinging on you
had enough of depression
and all of these people

why can't i live in peace
can anyone hear me
why must they crowd
showing hatred i never started
forget it i am done with this
gone from all of  you not looking back

© 2012 Aka_Kitsune


Author's Note

Aka_Kitsune
sorry if it is too negative i just needed to get things off my chest please review

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I too have written on being unnoticed; overlooked in a Haiku "See Me". Your piece presents the quandry in whether or not to allow others to diminish your like. Nicely captured, if a bit obscure. But, I like that.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ssometimes poetry is negative. And negative images are just as important as positive images. It depends on what you have to say.

Posted 13 Years Ago


thats okay. poetry is the best way to get your thoughts out of your mind and down in words! :)
i love the first verse xD and i can relate to this. there are those people who always start stuff for no apparent reason >.> just to make themselves look better.
in my opinion, this is high school for some people
anyways haha it's a very strong and nice poem ^_^ the title really fits this well

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Aka_Kitsune
Aka_Kitsune

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my real name is Shawn Jewell, i wish to make a small name for myself & perhaps make a friend or two as i continue writing :) i mostly write poetry but i am in the process of working on a book :D .. more..

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