Redemption

I taste glass, its hallow tips speaks letters of failure into my self esteem.
My hope gone, destitution hugs my body with warm whispers and blissful fantasies that soar religiously, leaving depression in its trail.
In this circle of fate, a ring of unfortunate events spit acid at my soul with sharp laughter and fake words of wisdom to set backs that lead to suicide's angelic calling....
My river of tears refuse to evaporate and detonate the circle's cruel words that slices me open little by little.
My riches turned to rags.
Happiness to sad.
All the, "worst that could happen", sinarios played in front of the projection screen of this film named life.
I cower in fear, as the laughs get more diabolical by the second, and suicide lends me a hand out of this torment.
But a blaze suddenly lit up inside of me.
Not of pain, nor evil, but strength.
The strength to cause demolition to the circumstances in front of me.
The strength of happiness, love, and Reddemption.
I scream freedom, as the circle's destructive alliance turns to ash, and a smile gives light to the end of the tunnel.
I lift off, soaring through this new found freedom, even better than the one before.
I'm happy, confident, and better than ever, as this euphoria swallows me, and leaves endless energies of gratitude in me.

Reviews

[KingDavid]

That was so deep, I didnt get some of it... wow. Well, Its a reasonably well off piece, but I can point out a few things for you.

2nd line: You could change 'destitute' to 'destitution'

Then, a few errors in spellings; scenarios, redemption.

Well. All the changes I suggest are purely of my unbiased opinion, so don't let it discourage you too much.
You are talented, and once you take control of it, you will be unstoppable.

[Ajthewriter]

Thanks man! Btw, constructive criticism is always great. lol.