Is there anybody ...somebody out there?

Family can't fill the void
Nor can the many friends 
What is it that keeps pulling down
I really can't understand 
May be it's nothing
But why does it feels everything
May a longing for something
Or may be a longing for someone
Why do I distance myself from people 
And wish to be left alone
Why are the things not the way they were before
Why do I miss myself being myself
Is there anyone out there with a void void like mine
Is there any body who would understand 
Is there anybody who would resist the resistance to fill the void in me
Is there anybody ....somebody out there

Reviews

[¿]

I love rhyming - everytime I see a rhyme in a poem I say this!!
Some says it's a novice quality..but am totally ok and happy with that!!
Poetry with rhyming are my fave and best just like this one😊
I'm here! - grabbing a copy of it in my library😊

[Airafh]

Much appreciated Tahsin. Keep reading

[Coyote Poetry]

Easy to lose ourselves. We will look in the mirror and we will see a stranger. I understand the poem and we cannot stop change. Maybe we suppose to change? Thank you Airaft for sharing the powerful words and thoughts.
Coyote

[barleygirl]

Some poems use questioning here & there, but this is the best collection of probing questions I’ve read, all together in one poem. And it doesn’t sound a bit tiresome with the constant questions. That’s becuz each question is well-crafted to be a realistic question that many people might ask. Also, the combination of all these questions adds up perfectly to your final line, which echoes the title. This leaves us with a sensation of not being relatable, when everything in your poem is very relatable. I think that questioning is more the domain of the youthful. Once you get old like me, then we mostly say: “It is what it is!” But it’s fun to see what’s on your mind, you young pups! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Airafh]

I think I have also reached the stage where I say "It is what it is". I'm glad you loved this.
read moreI think I have also reached the stage where I say "It is what it is". I'm glad you loved this.
Love,
Ariafh

[Priyanshi]

almost each soul in this world feels the same kind of loneliness which u feel buddy.poem is relatable. Rather I would say each line looks like belonging to me....totally relatable poem.
loved your work.
But i would say, this loneliness might curb u each day or night, but try your best to be the happiest in this world.

[Airafh]

Really this kind of feeling sucks, but now I have a found a friend to deal with - Nature. I have a found a nice secluded beautiful garden and I got there often when Im dull or pensive and then I get so busy by admiring the trees, plants, flowers, listening to the birds sing and all the other things which alleviates the loneliness. I shall soon post a short writing of this secluded place, please do read.

[Priyanshi]

So sorry for late reply...
and that's really very good that u have a beautiful garden...
read moreSo sorry for late reply...
and that's really very good that u have a beautiful garden...
For sure,I'll read your short writing...

[Zoya]

Yep, there sure are people out there with nothing but voidness in their heart; i feel the same at times. But it's always good to know that there's someone out there who'd understand what you're really going through.
Nicely expressed.

[Airafh]

Thank you Zoe. :)

[Sami Khalil]

I go through those feelings so often. I can relate to that. Hard to understand but all true. An excellent write, sir.

[Airafh]

Thank you so very much Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.