# FROM FLAW TO FLAWLESS!

"sometimes we are so much bought by one's outer beauty.....that we tend to forget what that person may look like from inside...."

I might don't have straight blond hair

but baby, i do look wonderful......

in my light brunette wavy hair!

I might not be as intelligent as she is

but yes, i'm creative and intelligent .....

in my arena ; as she is in her's!

I might not be as brave enough as her

but definitely, i do have strength.....

to hold both of us!

I might not wear small black dress like her

but honey, i do look fabulous....

 in my black faded high waist jean and white sweatshirt...

I might night not  be as flawless as her

but my dear, i won't regret it.....

'cause from my flaws i become unique!

so,

you might think that i ain't perfect

but listen, in my imperfections.....

i look perfect!

and

if you don't want me....

i'll still love you!!

if you make those silly mistakes

i'll still forgive you.....unlike her

'cause it's one of my flaws.....

'cause priyam, you are ONE OF MY MISTAKE... 

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

No one in this wordless is Flawless my friend. The way you described the inner beauty and strength of a girl is simply awesome. The last two lines are one my fav from the whole prose.

[anonymous_at]

Thanks a lot for stopping by and reviewing..... :)... Ya no one is perfect but sometimes few people don't get the love of their loved ones just because of many flaws they have..... Btw have u been lying low!!?!!😂😂....

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

lol lying low!!?!! Nah never.....

[anonymous_at]

Great then..... :)

[Mirror]

greaaaaaaaat write.

how often this happens. inner beauty can't be compared to outer beauty. I love the confidence!!!!

"I might don't have straight blond hair" I think you may have wanted to write "I might not have straight blond hair"
and;
"'cause from my flaws i become unique!" maybe "'cause from my flaws is (or becomes) unique!"

My dearest, I lovvvvve this write.

[anonymous_at]

Thanks for taking out your time to review my work and super thanks for positive review.... I'll try to take care of these mistakes...... :) hope you like other poems too... Keep visiting...

[wordman]

and you look unique to me,inside and out

[anonymous_at]

Thanks for your kind and encouraging words....i hope priyam does notice that.....:)

[wordman]

youu`re welcome

[anonymous_at]

Sure.... :)

[barleygirl]

As my first look at your page & your writing, I must first say that I really enjoy your uninhibited & energetic spirit that pours off the page. When you convey your message with so much energy & verve, it's easy to forget there are other points of view. What I love about your message here is that you are very mindful of the other's point of view, even tho you're expressing yours strongly & enthusiastically. It's a very good thing to not step on others when we do such comparisons (you didn't). This is a message of inspiration for the many who feel insecure about their looks and if they don't "fit in" . . . (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[anonymous_at]

Well.... I'm really flattered margie..... Thanks a lot......for taking out your time to go through my page and to review..... Well when you are the one to go through these situations then you learn..... So u see.... It's my reality.... And what had happened to me in past few years.... Has left me totally empty.....and hopeless.... and i didn't have anyone by my side to back me up... But i want others to read my poems and feel the message as their back up.....
XOXOXO
-A-

[barleygirl]

There are many who try to write inspiring messages, but it ends up sounding like a cheerleader or a sermon. There's something real & friendly about the way you do it. You share your own experiences whereas many would-be inspirers use "you" -- you should do this & you should do that (not fun to receive this type of inspiration). So, keep on being spirited & uninhibited & fair in your presentations!

[anonymous_at]

Ya sure Margie.... Well tbh I'm on cloud nine 'cause of your reviews..... Thanks a ton...
((Hugs))
-A-

[Thedreamer16]

Oh my god...i've read alot many of ur writing..But trust me..This 'THE BEST' writing of urs till date...From the grammar to the message..Everything is just perfect..Proud of u..And well..If I decide the rating for this article..Then it will be way behind..100..Such an amazing read..Really a treat for me😍

[anonymous_at]

thanks a lot mum......it really means a lot to me......i will try to write more great poems....

[Thedreamer16]

Don't write great poems...Just pen down ur true self..And trust me that is when u will just throw the words on the paper and they will themselves become magic😍

[Avia]

Good job. yes, you are perfect the way you are and the right people will see that :)

[anonymous_at]

Thank a lot for encouraging me..... :)

[Avia]

My pleasure :)

[anonymous_at]

hope everyone likes it......and please ignore grammatical errors (if any)....positive and constructive reviews are welcome....