TRUST THE LITTLE WORD'S MIGHT

This poem goes to all the people who lack courage to express their love feelings to others. Let nothing prompt you to think you are too poor or ugly to express your feelings. Just say it!

Unwonted diamond, who is worthy your visor cracked?;
An ordinary game flying with all feathers plucked;

Amazing frightening rags cover you beneath;
who is the cuckoo to extract you under this ugly sheath?;

What is love, if it means no segregation?;
Tell me, aren't queens for kings an obligation?;

But she is the only
authority in this silent jungle;
Without a king but you to make empty the jangle at her stumble;

How long will you open your ears to talk;
When by the little "I love you" the religous crave for pock?

Trust the little word brother!

Author's Note

What do you think about the author's love opinion?

Reviews

[Stefano Segnan]

Greetings to you! The poem is exquisite. It seems you sacrificed some musicality for an easier flow and imagination, nonetheless the latter compensates quite well. I read it a couple of times but I am still not sure what do you mean in the third stanza, mostly the first verse. You do not have to answer that, I am going to ponder on it for a while. On the other hand I think the last stanza is simply great.

[Aimloce Greyfield]

Greetings to you brother! Thank you again for the wonderful preview and kind words. Wishing you a deep thought as you ponder over the third stanza LOL. Just answer those rhetorical questions then pick it from there. Again, feel apreciated.