NATURE'S BLACK IS WHITE WHEN LOVE IS HOT

Deep thought about what really true love is

Man's first love shown is a girl;
Her heart's hue must eye his heart gail;
Nature's candle beam to a match stick light;
Sometimes twice a candle beam is even
might;
Does not an engine carry an engine rarely to
perfom?;
Of most surety but an olifer must transform;
Coldness at the brook is handsome, but
beautiful from hot;
And nature's black is white when love is hot

Author's Note

What do you think about the authors point of view?

Reviews

[Connie MaryN]

I think to say much I'd just be wrong but the right thing to say to this is that"this is amazing talented writing."

[Phillip Francis]

I couldn't agree more with Stefano. This poem lingers with the reader. Thank you for sharing.

[Aimloce Greyfield]

Hie Philip, thank you so much for your review. That incourages me to share even more. I really apreciate that

[Stefano Segnan]

Greetings! This poem is great! I read it a few times and the imagery and the rhythm are still lingering in my heart and mind. There's nothing else to say. I can only ask you: do you have more poems you would like to share?

[Aimloce Greyfield]

Hie Stefano, thanks for the review. Will surely be sharing more. Actually have lots to share. My mind is just full of thoughts that need to be told. This is the space to be. Again, thanks alot from me.