Running For Tomorrow

This is a very short poem, one I wrote a while ago, but it is still one of my favourites.

People all around,

Rushing to and fro.

Only ever stop to think,

About how much they know.

Knowledge doesn't matter,

When you're in a world of grey.

Running for tomorrow,

Never noticing today.

Reviews

[Steph]

Oooh I really like this poem! Simplistic and really easy to read. I understand why it's one of your favourites. I loved your rhyming scheme as well. My favourite lines were ^^ Knowledge doesn't matter,
When you're in a world of grey. ^^

[Aimee Olivera]

Thanks! I always read people's poems that are soooo long, but I think that there is no need to use two words when one would be sufficient. (As long as it sounds equally good or better!)
Aimee (: