The People in My Head

There are people in my head,

who chatter all day long,

They control my every movement,

And laugh when I go wrong.

 

There's Charlie,

He's the Nightmare,

He scares me in my dreams,

He creeps right up behind me,

So I always scream.

 

There's Lola,

She's a flirt,

She messes up my head,

And sometimes when she makes me blush i think

She's better off dead.

 

There's Tommy,

He likes to dance,

Especially in school,

He thinks he's being funny,

He thinks he's being cool.

 

There's Maisie,

She's a dreamer,

She makes me dream at school

All day

I don't think she can help help it

But all the others shout out yay!

 

There's Mikey,

The voice of Doom,

He can make me cry,

He tells me that i'm worthless,

He makes me want to die.

 

As well as mikey, there is Jess,

The smiley happy one,

She likes to grin and giggle,

To lighten up my day.

 

So now you see,

I'm a bit messed up,

With these people living in my head,

That make me love, laugh, cry,

These people in my head.

 

Author's Note

Pleasse review!! (oops i can't even spell please)

Reviews

[Cosmic Dreamer]

this poem made me smile. A lot :D The first and last stanzas are my favourite, but all of the people are awesome too, especially Maisie :) You're probably not messed up, I'm sure everyone else has people in their heads (??? :)
Thanks for sharing (oh, and welcome to Writerscafe!) :)

[Freeminded]

I like the idea of the people in your head
i some of the ending lines of some stanzas are a bit dodgey, for instance, in the second stanza, i feel the end line is somewhat weak.

like phoebe says, come back in 2 months to it