Origins: Rebirth

Origins: Rebirth

A Poem by Amanda
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Part 2 of the Origins epic

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The gods despaired, their work undone,

The Race of Kings defeated,

But knew they something Man did not,

Their task was not completed,

For Dragons lived, but hid in fear,

Of Man’s relentless fury,

They dwelt in caves and seas but still,

Were never safe from worry,

Thus said the gods, “This cannot be,

The order is asunder!

The rightful king is he we made,

To set aright our blunder.”

Yet knew they then what would ensue

Should man be overthrown,

For now that Dragons were so loathed,

They’d never gain the throne,

So thought they up a plan to give,

The Dragons some relief,

To let them freely roam the earth,

And sooth much of their grief,

So set they out to find a Man,

A vessel for their use,

A mind to mold, a body change,

To bring, at last, a truce,

But found they first, instead, a girl,

Of wealth and local fame,

But wont of greed, of Man-like sins,

Free of her Race’s shame,

Selected they this Elder child,

To bring to life their plan,

They placed a flame within her chest,

And no more was she Man.

 

© 2010 Amanda


Author's Note

Amanda
Part 2 of "Origins," also coincides with my novel, Towadako. This lightly explains the role of Sakura in the story. Please critique! Thanks!

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I love this classic rhyming format~ and the fairy tale encrusted with mythic gems is a delight!~ (even better that a female was chosen ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like how this flows. Now to go back and read part one lol

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 27, 2010
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I'm a small-town business student who loves to write. I have just recently completed the final draft of my first-ever manuscript, most of which can be found on my page under "The Race of Kings: The Dr.. more..

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