The new happy

Porcelain skin
Crystal eyes
Killer legs
You realize
Gentle touch
Oh so soothing
Musical voice
Oh so moving
All the hearts
You seem to break
All the make up
Oh so fake
Name unlike
Jill or Alice
Its uncommon
Dripping with hidden malice
Bubble gum tongue
Candy lips
Tiny waist
Amazing hips
On the outside
You steal their heart
On the inside
You fall apart
Plastic smiles
Say your okay
While your heart screams
There's no effing way!
Trapped beneath
Your flawless skin
Choking on fumes
Your the deadliest sin
The teenage goddess
Breathe it all in
Let go princess
You're not gonna win
Don't you dare cry
They'll think your sappy
Face it girly
Perfection's the new happy

Reviews

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

Love this poem, you've got such a good poing with it. I'd try putting in some punctuation though to emphasise parts that need to be like:

"Face it girly
Perfection's the new happy"

Maybe try a colon. Just stuff like that, 'caus it could make it read better

[Myrinn Lastena-Sterling]

Thats super cool!

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

I like it, it sounds so awesome great poem

[Emily Paige]

I love this read my poem magic of make up the spelling sucks but it's the same idea as this