mirror

mirror mirror
on the wall
who's the biggest joke of all?
who's as ugly as a witch?
who shall be buried in a muddy ditch?
mirror mirror
please tell me...
what is it the others see?
her pathetic looks should be a crime!
why is she wasting everyone's time?
mirror mirror
tell me this...
if she would die, would she be missed?
would sorrow wash over them like a wave?
or would they dance upn her grave?
mirror mirror
is it true?
should she just try something new?
is she now beyond a freak?
is she just pathetic and weak?
mirror mirror
on the wall
who 's the biggest joke of all
well, just as everyone can see...
the biggest joke of all
is me...

Reviews

[hope.]

wow. i really like it. i can relate as you can to my poem... its really good! we all often find ourselves looking at who we think we are, but its completely biased. cheer up, sunshine!

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. When we look in the mirror. We know the weaknesses and disappointment in our face and life. So many strong lines in the poem. I like the flow like a nursery rhythm. A excellent poem.
Coyote