The Land of Old

This is the land of old

Filled with shapes both strange and bold

 

Trees covered in crystallized sap

A bee hive hangs like a golden sack

 

Lakes sit and streams flow

Clouds float and winds blow

 

This is the land of old

Filled with shapes both strange and bold

 

Reviews

[StillShorterThanYou]

this really makes me think of elves and just mythical beings :)

[Imagination-mage]

i really like this poem!! As expected from a cool guy like u!

[Esana Bridges]

I like the rhyming two lines. They added a bit of a fable/story feel to this poem. The imagery was also good and invoked lots of visions in my mind. Still though, I feel like if you had included even more images and expanded this poem, you could have made it even more beautiful. However, as it is now, it is still a very nice piece.

[Jaya Miller]

I like this a lot! It has really good descriptions and imagery:)