Fading

Dreams fade .. but try your best !!

Something is burning inside...

missing the rain...

these feelings come alive....

to freez my pain...

but it doesnt work...



coz there's nothing replace breathing....

i've got bored...

i've got week ...

i'm bleeding...



bleeding from the outside...

to the inside..

you could never see the blood.....

coz you are just blind..
like always..

you've never seen what's going on around....

you always hear the words..

but you don't listen to the sound...

can you get it????!!!

just try to feel it..

this is the voice of my spirit...

one more tear become awake..

after a long sleeping....

i don't want to let it down..

but who can give it a break !!!

why do i have to give ...

if i'm not ganna take !!?

it's life my old friend...

you get in without choices...

& one day you will get out...

someone is crying...

someone is laughing laudly...

& someone shout...

someone in LOVE.....

oooh....LOVE...

what a word !!!!

i hope if im that one...

but you know....

hope isn't enough..

i'm about to forget how love feels...

seems like nowhere to go...

& nowhere to stay...

so what will you do???

if you can't stand anymore..

more over you can't run away....!!


they said : YOU LIVE YOU LEARN

but...

the losing card is what i always play..

somthing squeezing me..

set me free....

im flyin...
high..
cold air...
im freezing...
become a piece of ice...
flying direct to the sun...
to the bottom of the sun...

Reviews

[Siena - Silent Awakenin..]

Brilliant! I found that their were a vast amount of emotions being shown throughout this, especially numbness, and I think thats what makes it feel and seem so alive. I Loved it, from the rhyme to the style. You've got great potential. :)