Centered

Ahmad Cox · 2 minutes ago

Centered

Center of 
Everything
Center of 
The universe
Center of 
Life and earth
Center of 
Heaven and mind
Center of 
All knowing
Center of 
Power and
Light in the
Vast and 
Wonderful
World that
Lives in our
Minds eye
We see so 
Much in 
Our own
Center and
Thoughts 
Knowing
The truth
As we go 
Along as
We get 
More 
Centered
In life as
We move
Along in life
As our souls
Get closer to
That inner 
Oneness
The inner 
Knowing 
Of all that
Comes from
Centering 
Our minds
Thoughts
Intentions
Into one 
Single 
Point
Purpose
Goal 
Heal
Grow
Learn
As you
Go along
Becoming
Closer to 
Finding
The divine 
Oneness 
That comes 
From love

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I totally loved this piece of Power and poetry...So nice, expressive with the sharp-down words order, we are all centered ,but we have to be in God, not in our narrow minds. Great lines, dear friend!
Get closer to
That inner
Oneness

-nour-
June-013

[Fréyjä Helv..]

It didn't have to say much. You've made the flow of your poem as calm and serene as possible. A sort of written meditation. Good job

[Marissa Brazzell]

This piece of writing reminds me of something but I can't remember what. Good job

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Really nice, I like the thought in this. And I like this part that caught my attention:
"We see so
Much in
Our own
Center and
Thoughts "

[Blue Ivory]

One suggestion. Put more words in your lines? It's easier to make sense of your writing then. Just my opinion though.

[Junert]

Nice. Love.

[Barbara Walker]

Your writing flows in a very relaxing way. Your centered spirit comes through very well.

[Tarry Franck]

Enjoyed the flow of this and the wonderful meaning your sending out :)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

The only way to keep our balance in a topsy turvy world is it not? I enjoyed.

[MandaBear]

Wow. I really liked this! I liked how you put the 2 min. ago very clever! really set the tone. Great job!