Force

There is a force
An undeniable 
Power and energy
That flows through
Everything on the
Earth and in the
Universe as we
Watch our lives
Roll out in front
Of of us this force
Comes from the 
Darkness and
Lights the way
For us when we
Are at our most
Lowest point
Love flows
Through the
Earth and In
Everything
We all have 
This healing
And loving
Force inside 
Of us and 
When we 
Give in to
This love
And that
Wonderful
Healing 
Force and
Light that
Permeates
Your very 
Soul and
Permeates
Every atom
Of the universe
You will come
To understand
The greatest 
Force and power
Is love divine
When you give
Yourself over
To this force
Of the universe
You will come
To understand
Everything and
Life will begin
To take on a 
Whole new 
Beauty and
Hope and
Meaning as
You begin to
See this life
Giving force
And love in
Everything
And everyone

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Oh what a really nice write. I love the thought in this. I love the beginning, there is indeed something special, an invisible force that is among us around us on the Earth.

[Blue Ivory]

Beautiful poem! It's true, everyone needs to let that Force in. It's the answer to all our problems, but sadly most don't realize that, or are incapable of carrying it out.

[Ahmad Cox]

Yeah I believe that we all have the power inside to heal ourselves and be that healing force for others as well but more and more people are beginning to become more aware but unfortunately a good majority of people just arent awake or aware enough to know better.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

everyone needs to learn how to give love, to Really give, without expecting anything, and also to feel the pure joy from it! only then we will be free in mind, free in our spirit and will make the biggest progress...yes, and always :
The greatest
Force and power
Is love divine

[Barbara Walker]

Great words of teaching Ahmed. In the fifteenth line, the word "most" is redundant, as you have already written the word "lowest". It detracted from the flow a little bit, for me.

[Annabelle Lee]

Might take some people a little more work to realize the force

[Frieda P]

Let the force be with you Ahmad...nice one as always, very uplifting read.

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. The force comes from the father and the son.

[MandaBear]

"Use the Force Luke use the force" lol awesome write!

[Ahmad Cox]

Hehe yes. Use the force young jedi

[Livin'todieCS]

When I read your poetry, my mind falls silent...that's so rare.

[Ahmad Cox]

I guess thats a good thing. :0

[Livin'todieCS]

Yes good thing! Very good thing :)!!

[Holly Mason]

yes force is a strong movement,emotion it is a string word
when I was a little girl I would cry for a piece pf paper tossed aside blowing down the street-I wasn't crazy I felt bad for it lonely,not wanted,scraping itself
force a word worth this write you have done it well
thank you for sharing

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad you could feel the deeper meaning and truth.

[SimpleMind]

Wonderful Ahm!
I've read a book about healing, and you've said the idea that was conveyed there.
Energy. It's like all non-living things have their own power and energy that we can use for ourselves.

[Ahmad Cox]

Yep. It is so true. There is hidden healing and power in every thing if we are sensitive and open enough to it.

[SimpleMind]

But not all people have this gift, gift of being sensitive to such things. :)
Therefore, I say you're special.