Every Time You Feel Lonely

Every time you 
Feel lonely or sad
Or you feel like
Your life doesn't
Make sense and
When it feels like
Things are the 
Darkest is when
You must search
For the light and
The love just waiting
Beneath the surface
Its always there if
You know where
To look inside of
Your heart and 
Soul and when 
You find that 
Light that leads
You through the
Storm and through
The trials of life you
Will feel that much
Stronger and whole
Through the lessons
Of life that might 
Come your way 
If you have faith
You can move
Mountains and
Change the course
Of rivers with your
New found strength 
And faith and light
That is flowing in
Your soul as you
Begin to show 
And share your
Inner light and
Strength to others
To be the beacon 
Of light and faith
To show others the
Way when they feel
Lonely or like life
Isn't fair you can show
Them through your 
Own light and experience
There is always a brighter
Way through the storm
And showing and sharing
Your gift of light and healing
To all who are willing to see

Reviews

[Annabelle Lee]

not bad

[scripted]

Reading this poem brought me up... Things aren't going so great right now in life, but reading this made me realize that life will get better. In times of darkness it may seem impossible but I have found that it is not and you reminded me of that. Thank you for sharing. yours truely Danielle

[Ahmad Cox]

I am truly glad my poem could help you in that way.

[clairekeown25]

my friends little sister died recently and i am trying to be this light for him, i know i have it in me to share wth him, and i see all my other friends have it too and without it he would be lost, we all have the capacity within ourselves to love and connect and experience what you have written about

[Ahmad Cox]

Yes. I am glad that you can understand and know that it is something that we can all live by and be that example for others as well.

[Be myself!]

nice. i like this. good job

[Nick.B]

Great write with a wonderful imaginary, love how you structured the poem and the fact that it is very emotional, I can relate to it....great job

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad you can relate.

[Fashell]

I can see your experience and wisdom through this piece. I was able to connect with it and think, "Yes, that's true." Thanks for sharing it.

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad you could appreciate it in that way.

[Junert]

The light, and you always share with me.

[Ahmad Cox]

I never mind sharing with you.

[Frieda P]

Another uplifting read....light and love. Much hope in your words, and you bring that to other's...just lovely, much enjoyed!

[Ahmad Cox]

I am glad I could bring some extra hope your way. :)

[MandaBear]

Everytime I feel lonely I talk to you and I feel better :); great poem!!!

[Ahmad Cox]

Aww thank you. I appreciate that. I enjoy talking with you too. Its nice talking with a cute dork such as yourself